This blog is a record of my learning from Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ through to Tamaki College.
Monday 30 November 2015
Thursday 26 November 2015
Tuesday 24 November 2015
Mahara's Description Planning Template - Athletics Day
what I smelt
The fresh air was coming to my face like a fan and I smell the
The tasty sausage sizzle as the teams walked around the bike track.
and fresh air rising through my nose.
I could smell the fresh cut grass as we sat down to begin.
I smelt Perfume from Mrs Kelly.
The delicious food that families had brought for their children.
what I heard
I heard the rumbling sound of cheering as teams battled for the number one spot.
I heard parents cheering on their children like a crowd at an All Blacks game.
and I heard soft soothing voice of Miss Kyla calling up the racers.
there was a sharp claps of the starting blocks like lighting in the sky.
I heard the air whip past my face as kids sped past me like flash.
I heard Miss Kyla speaking over the microphone like she was howling like a wolf.
I heard Miss Kyla calling up the year levels peacefully.
I heard the houses chanting loud like alarms were going off.
what I saw
I saw a rainbow dragon walking around the track it as like when the house sat down it was like a set of blocks on the grass I saw a herd of people at the finish line like tiger’s getting ready for there prey ready set go as the people ran past the looked like flash and zoom I saw the teacher’s giving iceblock sticks out there was a whole line of a rainbow of students going to miss kelly I saw the house’s there were benghazi tobruk tripoli alamein
felt
I felt neres as I went on the track ready set go we were off I was thoth I Was going to lose it felt like I won 1 million dollar’s I felt famous like michael jackson I came 4th place in my race it was lunchtime I was proud like a hunter that got bigfoot I felt the sweat dripping down my skin like a melting icecream cone.
I felt as hot as lava.
and I felt my head going off like a volcano.
I felt the smooth grass against my legs.
I felt the sun was cooking people when they had no sunblock on
I felt sorry for the people that lost
I tasted
I tasted the FRESH air I tasted the smell of sausage sizzles I could taste the glory as I crossed the finish line.
I could taste of the tangy sausage sizzle and
I could taste butterflies in my stomach as I was getting ready to run.
I could taste the sausage sizzle as people walked by.
BY Mahara
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