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Thursday 22 October 2015

SUN POSTER


hey this is my sun poster it  show word's of the sun by Mahara an always feel free to add a comment!!!
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6 comments:

  1. Anonymous22 October 2015 at 12:42

    Hi Mahara,
    I like the way you described the sun like a disco ball.
    Keep it up.
    Maybe next time include more interesting words.

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  2. Anonymous22 October 2015 at 12:46

    wallmei this amazing and really cool you are awsome

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  3. Anonymous22 October 2015 at 12:47

    Mahara this amazing and really cool you are awsome

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  4. Anonymous22 October 2015 at 12:55

    Hey Mahara
    I like how you use adjectives and similes in your sun poetry using the work that you done in the other day.
    PEACE!

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